Knocturne's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[michael the friendly ghost]

There's a difference between dark and insensitive.

This is almost like laughing during a funeral, it's just not what you do.

As far as dark humour, I'm all for it, just when it isn't actually perpetuating negativity and desicrate the memory of the newly deceased.

peixeaquatico responds:

then it is matter of time until you can fun with it

[Santi]

Fun

It's a fun style you used, reminiscent of cubism but it is lacking something.

Ursamember responds:

thanks !!!

[Value Feet]

Very nice

I personally love working with charcoal, I find this piece very expressive with such a simple idea.

[Day & Night]

Good concept

I like how you got night and day with the seasons but it's very unfinished looking to me.

Perhaps adding space as the background along with some stars would enhance this.

Ying-yong responds:

It's actually not supposed to have that white background, just the wheel of color.

But that's a good idea, thank you.

[just some guy]

Background

I know I'm the only one to say this, but you need a background.

[Me]

It's a fun style but...

It's lacking, if you added colour, a background or more characters it'd be such a complete piece, but since it lacks all of those, it feels empty.

MangArtist responds:

Gotcha. I didn't add much cause it was for my Deviant Art id. I may play with it later on, though. >_>

[Jet]

It needs

More background and less names.

[Babylon]

Looks like Marilyn Manson

I don't know if that was intentional.

[Blue]

And I thought of Scooby Doo

My first thought was, "I would have gotten away with it if it weren't for you meddling kids!"

I love the use of colour and how you got that glow effect going.

JJhoop responds:

Um, scooby doo? what?