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I feel the proportions are off, most females tend to have much more of a tapering at the waist, unless this person is pre-pubescent or just not an average female.

The other things that bother me, is the fact that as the eye travels down the amount of effort seems to dwindle, this makes me think you worked from up to down.

The leg positionings seem off, her right leg should be more solid, because there is no weight being held by either leg.

Her ankle is also contorted in an odd fashion, both feet are positioned weird. It's very nice despite the mentioned issues.

krumpingkatie responds:

Her upper half was based on me naked :( I didn't give her my EPIC HIPS OF WONDER though, i didn't really want her to be the busty, small waisted big assed girl that they always seem to be drawn as. Dainty, young, whatever, i guess your complaint means i did the job i was aiming to do well :)

And yeah her left foot looks totally fucked up, i don't think i meant to even include feet. And dude, she's an angel, she's probably floating or something, she doesn't NEED to support her weight. But thanks for being constructive and not just 'I DONT LIKE IT U SUK LOL'

much love x

And the nicest guy!

Two Hercules'! And the style is so close to the actual one!

Heheh

I don't see how it's based on the song, but I like it, Jamie Hewlett-esque style you got, this guy screams Murdoc in my ears hehe.

Keep it up.

Good job

I like your works as a whole, I feel in this, your original character looks a little like Haseo from the second Dot Hack game series. Just a coincidence probably.

TheOmiyan responds:

thank you for your comment and actually when i was i watched that hack television series and based my first looks on one of the hack characters besides all comic book artist get their ideas from another ( not all ideas just insperation).

Coraline

Looking through your gallery there is definitely a Tim Burton-esque sense of darkness going on, but they all seem to be lacking, as if something is missing. It's simple to the point of lacking so it's a weakness rather than a strength in my opinion.

Wrong rating, wrong catagory, wrong proportions.

This should be in adult, not mature. I feel two nudes, one straddling the other with outstretched tongues to be adult.

This should be in illustration and not fine art for obvious reasons.

As far as the actual illustration, the bodies are inaccurate the leg supporting the other woman is too relaxed to support her and it's too high up for it to exist in that position, the sitting woman's arm disappears. The woman sitting on the other one has her hand on the other's head but the hand and it's position are unnatural.

The woman looking up has a head which is too large for the proportions of her body, and the breasts on the other woman bulge where they should slope.

Hildebrandt responds:

There are only two possibilities:
1.: You are a woman
2.: You prefer the brown saloon.

Truly, Clamp

While you may feel your artstyle is unique drawing from components common to Newgrounds, I feel coining your own term is a little presumptuous and big headed. While your art isn't bad (I scouted you) most of the people I scout, I scout for their potential.

I think honing your skills before you try to revolutionize pre-existing styles or at least don't be so bold as to call it something.

Of course this is the internet and you can do whatever you want, but people will be turned off by the whole "Anistick" thing.

Creepy

She looks a lot like the killer doll Chucky in this, I think.

kevinsano responds:

hell no, Chucky is waaaaay uglier...

Looks robotic

Yes, it was a psuedo-pun. I think it feels very forced and the effects are kind of there just to make up for the uncomfortable feeling I get from seeing this.

Walkingpalmtree responds:

Hmmm...Well I have made people uncomforable in the past and actually the one with the glowy hair "Regina". In all my pictures she has the exact same hair it's no reall effect I'm jsut used to it and screwed up

It's good

I disagree with the other review which requested more detail. If you added depth and shading devices it'd lose it's adorable nature. I think the simplicity is it's charm.

Heh

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