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Knocturne

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It's lacking

Feels devoid of everything, and not in a complementary way. It needs a background most importantly, but I feel that it's not a complete story, as if the characters are just there. The dance they are doing is almost there.

jessiejan116 responds:

yeah i know lol. it was just a random thing ya know. im still working on it i just posted to see if it was wort finishing.

There's a difference between dark and insensitive.

This is almost like laughing during a funeral, it's just not what you do.

As far as dark humour, I'm all for it, just when it isn't actually perpetuating negativity and desicrate the memory of the newly deceased.

peixeaquatico responds:

then it is matter of time until you can fun with it

Fun

It's a fun style you used, reminiscent of cubism but it is lacking something.

Ursamember responds:

thanks !!!

Very nice

I personally love working with charcoal, I find this piece very expressive with such a simple idea.

Good concept

I like how you got night and day with the seasons but it's very unfinished looking to me.

Perhaps adding space as the background along with some stars would enhance this.

Ying-yong responds:

It's actually not supposed to have that white background, just the wheel of color.

But that's a good idea, thank you.

Background

I know I'm the only one to say this, but you need a background.

It's a fun style but...

It's lacking, if you added colour, a background or more characters it'd be such a complete piece, but since it lacks all of those, it feels empty.

MangArtist responds:

Gotcha. I didn't add much cause it was for my Deviant Art id. I may play with it later on, though. >_>

It needs

More background and less names.

Weird perspective

The way you drew the neck makes me think it's a profile shot, the way the head is placed on the neck makes me think that still. The way the ears are shown in a 3/4ths tilt makes it look like it's slightly from above, the smile is in profile, the rest of the head is in less of an above view than the ears, I think.

Looks like Marilyn Manson

I don't know if that was intentional.

Heh

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